Chapter 10.—The Necessity for
Perspicuity of Style.
24. Now a strong desire for
clearness sometimes leads to neglect of the more polished forms of
speech, and indifference about what sounds well, compared with what
clearly expresses and conveys the meaning intended. Whence a
certain author, when dealing with speech of this kind, says that
there is in it “a kind of careful negligence.”
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Yet
while taking away ornament, it does not bring in vulgarity of
speech; though good teachers have, or ought to have, so great an
anxiety about teaching that they will employ a word which cannot be
made pure Latin without becoming obscure or ambiguous, but which
when used according to the vulgar idiom is neither ambiguous nor
obscure, not in the way the learned, but rather in the way the
unlearned employ it. For if our translators did not shrink from
saying, “
Non congregabo conventicula eorum de
sanguinibus
,”
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because they felt that it was
important for the sense to put a word here in the plural which in
Latin is only used in the singular; why should a teacher of
godliness who is addressing an unlearned audience shrink from using
ossum
instead of
os
, if he fear that the latter might
be taken not as the singular of
ossa
, but as the singular of
ora
, seeing that African ears have no quick perception of
the shortness or length of vowels? And what advantage is there in
purity of speech which does not lead to understanding in the
hearer, seeing that there is no use at all in speaking, if they do
not understand us for whose sake we speak? He, therefore, who
teaches will avoid all words that do not teach; and if instead of
them he can find words which are at once pure and intelligible, he
will take these by preference; if, however, he cannot, either
because there are no such words, or because they do not at the time
occur to him, he will use words that are not quite pure, if only
the substance of his thought be conveyed and apprehended in its
integrity.
25. And this must be insisted on
as necessary to our being understood, not only in conversations,
whether with one person or with several, but much more in the case
of a speech delivered in public: for in conversation any one has
the power of asking a question; but when all are silent that one
may be heard, and all faces are turned attentively upon him, it is
neither customary nor decorous for a person to ask a question about
what he does not understand; and on this account the speaker ought
to be especially careful to give assistance to those who cannot ask
it. Now a crowd anxious for instruction generally shows by its
movements if it understands what is said; and until some indication
of this sort be given, the subject discussed ought to be turned
over and over, and put in every shape and form and variety of
expression, a thing which cannot be done by men who are repeating
words prepared beforehand and committed to memory. As soon,
however, as the speaker has ascertained that what he says is
understood, he ought either to bring his address to a close, or
pass on to another point. For if a man gives pleasure when he
throws light upon points on which people wish for instruction, he
becomes wearisome when he dwells at length upon things that are
already well known, especially when men’s expectation was fixed
on having the difficulties of the passage removed. For even
things that are very well known are told for the sake of the
pleasure they give, if the attention be directed not to the things
themselves, but to the way in which they are told. Nay, even when
the style itself is already well known, if it be pleasing to the
hearers, it is almost a matter of indifference whether he who
speaks be a speaker or a reader. For things that are gracefully
written are often not only read with delight by those who are
making their first acquaintance with them, but re-read with delight
by those who have already made acquaintance with them, and have not
yet forgotten them; nay, both these classes will derive pleasure
even from hearing another man repeat them. And if a man has
forgotten anything, when he is reminded of it he is taught. But I
am not now treating of the mode of giving pleasure. I am speaking
of the mode in which men who desire to learn ought to be taught.
And the best mode is that which secures that he who hears shall
hear the truth, and that what he hears he shall understand. And
when this point has been reached, no further labor need be spent on
the truth itself, as if it required further explanation; but
perhaps some trouble may be taken to enforce it so as to bring it
home to the heart. If it appear right to do this, it ought to be
done so moderately as not to lead to weariness and
impatience.
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Cicero,
Orator.
23:
“
Quædam etiam negligentia est diligens.
”
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“I shall not assemble their
assemblies of blood,”
Ps. xvi. 4
. (Vulgate.)
“Their drink-offerings of blood will I not offer.”
(A.V.)