Yet the whole work has defects of its own.
It is burdened with much repetition; subjects, especially, which have
been treated in books ii. and iii. are discussed again at great length
in later books E.g. bk. iii. is
largely reproduced in ix.; ii. 9 f. = xi. 46 f.. The frequent
stress laid upon the infinity of God, the limitations of human speech
and knowledge, the consequent incompleteness of the argument from
analogy, the humility necessary when dealing with infinities apparently
opposed E.g. i. 19, ii. 2, iii. 1,
iv. 2, viii. 53, xi. 46 f., though it adds to the solemnity of the
writer’s tone and was doubtless necessary when the work was
published in parts, becomes somewhat tedious in the course of a
continuous reading. And something must here be said of the
peculiarities of style. We saw that in places, as for instance in
the beginning of the De Trinitate, Hilary can rise to a
singularly lofty eloquence. This eloquence is not merely the
unstudied utterance of an earnest faith, but the expression given to it
by one whom natural talent and careful training had made a master of
literary form. Yet, since his training was that of an age whose
standard of taste was far from classical purity, much that must have
seemed to him and to his contemporaries to be admirably effective can
excite no admiration now. He prays, at the end of the first book,
that his diction may be worthy of his theme, and doubtless his effort
was as sincere as his prayer. Had there been less effort, there
would certainly, in the judgment of a modern reader, have been more
success. But he could not foresee the future, and ingenious
affectations such as occur at the end of book viii. § 1,
impietati insolenti, et insolentiæ vaniloquæ, et
vaniloquio seducenti, with the jingle of rhymes which follows, are
too frequent for our taste in his pages Cf. v. 1 (beginning of
column 130 in Migne), x. 4.. Sometimes we find purple
patches which remind us of the rhetoric of Apuleius E.g. v. 3
fin.;
sometimes an excessive display of symmetry and antithesis, which
suggests to us St. Cyprian at his worst. Yet Cyprian had the
excuse that all his writings are short occasional papers written for
immediate effect; neither he, nor any Latin Christian before Hilary,
had ventured to construct a great treatise of theology, intended to
influence future ages as well as the present. Another excessive
development of rhetoric is the abuse of apostrophe, which Hilary
sometimes rides almost to death, as in his addresses to the Fisherman,
St. John, in the second book Cf. Ad
Const. ii. 8, in writing which his own words in the De
Trinitate must have come into his mind. He had probably
borrowed the thought from Origen, contra Celsum, i. 62.
Similar apostrophes are in v. 19, vi. 19 f., 33.. These
blemishes, however, do not seriously affect his intelligibility.
He has earned, in this as in greater matters, an unhappy reputation for
obscurity, which he has, to a certain extent, deserved. His other
writings, even the Commentary on St. Matthew, are free from the
involved language which sometimes makes the De Trinitate hard to
understand, and often hard to read with pleasure. When Hilary was
appealing to the Emperor, or addressing his own flock, as in the
Homilies on the Psalms, he has command of a style which is
always clear, stately on occasion, never weak or bald; in these cases he resisted, or did
not feel, the temptation to use the resources of his rhetoric.
These, unfortunately, had for their result the production of sentences
which are often marvels of grammatical contortion and elliptical
ingenuity. Yet such sentences, though numerous, are of few and
uniform types. In Hilary’s case, as in that of Tertullian,
familiarity makes the reader so accustomed to them that he
instinctively expects their recurrence; and, at their worst, they are
never actual breaches of the laws of the language. A translator
can hardly be an impartial judge in this matter, for constantly, in
passages where the sense is perfectly clear, the ingenuity with which
words and constructions are arranged makes it almost impossible to
render their meaning in idiomatic terms. One can translate him
out of Latin, but not into English. In this he resembles one of
the many styles of St. Augustine. There are passages in the De
Trinitate, for instance viii. 27, 28, which it would seem that
Augustine had deliberately imitated; a course natural enough in the
case of one who was deeply indebted to his predecessor’s thought,
and must have looked with reverence upon the great pioneer of
systematic theology in the Latin tongue. But this involution of
style, irritating as it sometimes is, has the compensating advantage
that it keeps the reader constantly on the alert. He cannot skim
these pages in the comfortable delusion that he is following the course
of thought without an effort.